I really liked this poem. and thank you for ur comment i know its not all that exiting but that wasnt my point all the poem if for my bf who had borenk a promise to me and we had all ready wrked it all out. but i wanted him to know he could tell how i felt just my looking at me. but i really do appertioate ur comment im always opne for citizizem and on ways to help me imporve on my writing. so thank you:)
brittany

*Claps* sometimes rants are then best poetry.. they get to the heart of the amtter=) keep it up and coming

Love
Jenn x0x0x
Ps. take pride in your work, you took the time to make it *im really not someone who should say that but hey:D*