It sounded like you were definitely needing your love, and that you needed her to be close for always.
Very sweet!
The rhythm was soft and not very pronounced, but still quite charming.

Good Writing!
beth

Heres to another painfully perfect year

thats my favorite line....

i think every single one of your poems is about her now...kinda boring...and it shows your pretty darn obsessed...which is an okay thing to an extent, i know you just started to this is okay i think your a really talented guy though so once again just try something new! good job keep it up!

I kno exactly how u feel, unfortunately my relationship ended:(. anyway, this poem shos ur emmotions really well, n i think it is realy sweet...5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~