Comments : Northern Wilderness

  • 19 years ago

    by Lu

    Stormy , Stormy , Stormy this is just absolutly incredible . You paint such a vivid description it is amazing , breathtaking and beautiful ...I can't express enough how much I loved it ...

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    This is really an amazing poem, truly, the concept of a forest being a symphony orchestra is breath-taking in its beauty.
    Though I could advice that you skim quickly through it, there are just a few spelling mistakes, and I think that some lines got mingled, as in two separate lines were in the same line.

    Of course, this could have been a matter of style, but if it -was- a mistake then perhaps it would look cleaner if you put in just a few more commas and checked the spelling.

    Even without those changes, it is still a most amazing poem, with an absolutely beautiful ending.

    Excellent Writing!
    beth

  • 11 years ago

    by Christy Trenholm Schmall

    FANTABULOUS! Love the passion the Imagery I am carried away when I read it!!! THAT'S what poetry is SUPPOSED to do! Bravo!