I Was So Wrong

by Torn   Sep 26, 2005


I thought everything would be OK,
Thought i was free of this decay.
But this sadness follows me everywhere,
Leaving such a monotony in the air.
It's so hard to cope when you're as thick as lead,
It's hard to be alive when i feel so dead.
I feel like there is no soul within,
This empty corpse just cannot win.

Don't tell me that it'll be OK,
Theres nothing you can say to have your way.
Don't tell me there'll be better days ahead,
I've been waiting for so long, i should be dead.

This melancholy pain rips me apart,
I try to think back right to the start.
They say there's always a trigger,
But the only trigger is under my finger.
Without life there is no pain,
Without guts, you cannot gain.
So I'll free myself of expectations,
Maybe tonight I'll find salvation.
Many may think that it isn't right,
But I'm sick of playing this game in spite.
This is right for me in my head,
Going to a better place that lies ahead.

So late at night i was found,
Like my heart, on cold solid ground.

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  • 19 years ago

    by cecilia

    I really like all your poems they are really great. i love to right peoms. i put some on here but there not all that great.

  • 19 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Just too good to comment on...love

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    You will be so so wrong if you commit suicide...that's it...

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    Im really sorry you feel this way, i know what you mean though. and this poem was amazing sometimes the rhymes were off but the greatness of the piece made up for that lol

    This melancholy pain rips me apart,
    I try to think back right to the start.
    They say there's always a trigger,
    But the only trigger is under my finger.

    that was my favorite very clever

    your awesome

    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    Hey hang in there i think we all know how youre feeling, and it sucks caz no one can really help..only you can help yourself really caz probaly noone around you knows how down youre feeling...hang in there though dont let people do this to you, rise above and show them how strong you are and when you suceed itll be no thanks to them take care xxx

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