Your words seem to almost come alive. So powerful, left me thinking, great write.

Woow! that was awesome.. the flow was really something.. one thing that did bother me, and this is a personal thing, but every line doesn't need to be capitalized. you prolly know this and just did it because you want to, and go ahead if you'd like, but for me its not really appealing..
the imagery was great within this piece, a lot of great crisp visuals. i especially liked the fourth stanza..
the second and third stanza both use "rainbow," and i think it'd be better to use it only once, as that'll strengthen the imagery. if i was you, i'd take out the first use of rainbow and keep the second, as i like the image better, and to me it makes that stanza flow so gracefully..
im kinda critiquing backwards i guess, lol, but in the first stanza, second line:
The Light Delayed To Bloom
this phrase seems to stirke me as weird, and i think "to" could be changed to "in," otherwise, to me it just reads funny,.. but thats all opinion.. take it or leave it.. good read... =O) pZ

I'm speechless, this is the most beautiful poem i have ever read, you wrote it so perfectly that it made me cry, I'm so glad I read it!!! Wow, amazing, brilliant, excellent....I would give you way more than 5 =0)

*Much Love Sabrina*

Drew I Agree With You On The Use Of "Rainbow" In Those Two Stanzas 101%, When I Wrote It, I Asked Myself Would It Sound Weird If I Put It In There Twice, Your Very Preceptive...I Type This Way On Purpose...Your Honest Critique Was Appreciated Highly :) *Kisses* xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Doves Embraced Her Spirit
As She Melted In The Sky
Sadness Dripped Away
As The Angels Helped Her Fly

This stanza was simply breathtaking
Sadness pulls at my heart in this piece so sad but beautifully wrote .I really loved it

Awww *hugs* so sad!! beautiful all the same tho. amazing imagery, and simply breathtaking. very cool that you wrote it in your friends pov and worked in the emotion. i knew there was a reason im not doing my homework... maybe i'll show my teacher this and tell him this is why i didnt get it done lol take care nikki!! lots of love

Lol *Hugging JL* Thats The Greatest Exscuse I've Ever Heard! :) *Friends For Life* xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

I loved this poem. It was great. Definate 5/5. Just don't get carried away with your capitalizations. ^_^

I love the opening stanza! It created a beautiful image. A lovely piece written about such a tragic event. Your friend and her family are in my prayer's....Holly

Nikki
This truly reaches deep and touches the heart. I loved the whole poem but this stanza just tugged at my heart...

Doves Embraced Her Spirit
As She Melted In The Sky
Sadness Dripped Away
As The Angels Helped Her Fly

I'm completely speechless, now you are in my favorites...I will not miss another one of your beautiful pieces.

hugs, love, Ann

I'm very sorry for your friend's loss.