Soundly poem. Just a quick word of advice my friend. The last request in your poem "hi guys and girls please comment on my poem! " Is against the rules on this site. Not meaning to be picky but Bob is stamping down on this and i suggest you remove it :D

Otherwise you put alot of your heart into this; I guess we are all vunerable when it comes to believing others.

- Kalah.

I hope you will be fine. I know what your exactly going through. Just think. I'm 21 years old and I have gotten my heart broken so many times in my lifetime. Your way to young to get your heart broken. You should listen to other people's advice hun. Wait until your a little older to get your heart broken please. Your only 13 years old hun. You have to think about yourself before other's. By the way. GREAT job on your poem. Keep on writting. Good luck.

This Poem Was Really Good, It Was Heartfelt And Simply Put Yet Uniquely Stood Out!...I'm Not a Fan Of Love Poems..But This Poem Just Might Change My Mind About Them...That Was Well Worth My Read 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Hey hunni, gr8 poem.....i got the comment on my poem...thanx.....and i know you'll always b there for me..(hopefully!?) anywaizz...love u always...i updated my syt..chek it out...love u always

O...MA.....GOD!!!!!
your poems are absolutely breathe taking
your a beautiful writer, you express yourself really well in poems
you deserve a damn 100 for your writing chick!!!!!..keep up the awesome work , i can only give u 5 ....although you know you deserve a whole lot more!

Hey babe....omg how cool we r on at the same time....wow.....so yea miss u 2..yep ill call ya!mwa bum rum gum cum

Haha i changed it lmfao!!!so yea i was gonnasay sumfin but now i 4got hehehe love lots ...josie....

Oh yea i rember miss hignes how eva u spell her name SUCKS BALLS! oh yea and DuFf mAN hehehe IM SuCh a mIsTaKe! we can be mistakes 2gether

Im not on no drugs wink wink!!!lmfoa
okay if we have 2lmfao...i love u sexually hehehehe u turn me on u sexy thing!!! hahaha its a song!!!!

Hey babe if u read this get off the net ill call ya in 5 mins hehehehehe

Wow you can really rite!! was that a story that you can relate to cos i can.. thatx 4 your comment it was really nice of you!!

Wow..I can relate to that...Its so realistic to me....Thanks a whole bunch for your comment..You know im glad that u want to listen to what i have to say...Mostly what makes me sad is the thought of living a lonely life, my heart has been cushed by so many guys u couldnt believe, and i feel so worthless and alone..ill tell u more later..just email me k..at beautiful_dream06@yahoo.com...much Love and Friendship..Joclyn..Thanks so much again for that heartwarming comment

Yea im on now hehe i luv u 2! cant stop thinking of u!xoxoxox

Good poem. You put lots of emotions in it. It's very sensitive. Good job!

Nice shame 2 c u avnt writen anymor tho!!! pls comment my poems!!

Excellent poem, 5/5 stars...i completely now how you feel! You really put a lot of emotion into your poems!

read and comment my poems too!

Cutee poem
very good work!

The way u write, reminds me of how i write in a way... hah, i hope u dont take that as a bad thing
thank you so much for your care... right now i'm unsure of many things
how may i contact u?

-*tears*- ...you write inspirational p0emz chick! kp it up!