So very well written. You have managed to typify the fears of most Daddys for their little girls.

That was beautiful

This poem is really good,I love your poems,keep it up!

Hey omg you are a great writer i loved your poem wanted sucuide, i commented on it so be sure to read it, your writing is great, everything flows, and it actually means things, this is how i feel about my dad, we don't see each other anymore. please be sure to read my poems and comment on them it would really mean alot.

This poem was truly beautiful, if i had a tear left i would cry for this poem! very touching! well done and thanx for the comments....luv em

Oh my gosh, this poem gave me chills. You are an amazing writer, hun. I love your poems, you definitely should write more. Great job!! =)

Omg this poem is so good it almost brought tears to my eyes

Dani,

I love the beginning stanza its adorable, and I love the gradation coming down to the very last line. very well done, I dont have any poniters to give you =)

On another note: I'd like to welcome you to Fish bowl, I'm jenn the head fish, if you need anything let myfself or >tornapart or fighter know, we'll be happy to help. All i ask is that you read the welcome thread, and that you follow site and club rules. but most of all you have fun and enoy your stay in the bowl =) I'm looking forward to getting to know you and your writing,

Again, Welcome =)
Jenn

Omg this made me cry. i am seriously like crying right now this is so amazing right now i am reading all ur poems and i absolutely love them ur such a good writer keep it up!! xoxo

Wow, That poem was..breathtaking. it was so..wow. i cant think of what to say. Ur such an amazing writer, and i love all of your poems. Keep up your great work. Love ya! xBlackRosex aka, Jessica. Mwah!

I love this poem!!!!!!!

Woah.. this is such a sad poem.. so many ppl would find that this poem is true to them. and how their dad treats them.
your such a great writer.
please dont stop.
even if your suffering
from writers block
whatever comes to your head
always write it down
you never no what might happen
and whose life you could turn around

woah.. that was pretty cool,.. made a little rhyme.. keke. love ya hunni!

P.s. whats your msn addy? we should start talking :P

Speachless
5/5
amazing poem i dont know how to describe it with words....