Beautiful! You seemed to capture the feeling of early motherhood really well...wonderful piece :)

Rose
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What a great poem, yes you should hand this is in!!!!!!!!!!

Beautifully written, so intense and grabbed me from beginning to the end....You should deff handle this in, you wrote it so perfectly, very well done!!

Really beautiful, a lot of powerful emotion.

xxx cici xxx

Very beautiful! It was very emotional and from the heart... keep it up!

Love
Haily

Wow! amazing poem, it has real strength and love!
hope you are welL.
love jess XxXxXxXxX