My beloved

by aaron c s   Sep 26, 2005


Come,
my beloved.
Let us go out into the countryside.
Let us spend the night among the henna blossoms.
Let us rise early to the vineyards.
Let us see if the vine has budded,
its blossoms have opened,
the pomegranates have bloomed.
There I will give my love to you.
The mandrakes send out their fragrance,
and at our doors are delicious fruits,
both new and old,
which I have kept for you,
my beloved.

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  • 19 years ago

    by sarah

    I love it! The poem is filled with such joy and passion. I love your beautiful wording. such like "old english" such respect in it.
    Let us rise early to the vineyards.
    Let us see if the vine has budded,
    my two favorite lines ^. "let us rise", "let us see" and this poem is truly amazing.
    keep writing and take care

  • 19 years ago

    by bent but not broken

    Aww ilove this poem its so sweet
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by lee

    Wow, that was a good poem. and it really takes you somewhere in your mind. good job. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Awwww, Aaron, that's so sweet... you are so great at writing mushy love poems. hehe!
    Love always,
    ~Your bestestestest friend in the whole wide world~BJ~

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