Awwww, Aaron, that's so sweet... you are so great at writing mushy love poems. hehe!
Love always,
~Your bestestestest friend in the whole wide world~BJ~

Wow, that was a good poem. and it really takes you somewhere in your mind. good job. 5/5

Aww ilove this poem its so sweet
5/5

I love it! The poem is filled with such joy and passion. I love your beautiful wording. such like "old english" such respect in it.
Let us rise early to the vineyards.
Let us see if the vine has budded,
my two favorite lines ^. "let us rise", "let us see" and this poem is truly amazing.
keep writing and take care