Siren of My Dreams!!!

This is a poem I wrote to illustrate repetition and how it could be used in poetry. I wrote, constructed, and structured it, on the fly. I feel I've created a quality poem, but you can be your own judge. Tell me what you think of my poetic attempt at repetition?

Siren of My Dreams

I saw her, today, - within my minds eye.
A memory, from last nights dream.
I saw her, floating, from clouds on high.
But alas, her, I could not reach.

I saw her, today, - her smile; gorgeous, gleaming,
Melting, my heart's catacombs.
Like the stars, her beauty, beaming.
Reached out, for her, to discover, I was, alone.

I saw her, today, beckoning me, to follow,
Offering, pleasures, that I could only dream of,
Summoning me, to worship, at her feet,
But -- as in, her ecstasy, I began, to wallow,
Morning came again, and I woke up,
Yearning, for more, of her rhapsody, realizing, though, that she was only, a fantasy.

I saw her, today, only, alas, to have her, leave me.
But soon, I know, we shall meet again, as I lay me down, to sleep!!!

Robert Gardiner
R.G.Love