Valediction: On Time and Love (Part II. Oblivion)

by HansRik   Sep 26, 2005


Thus Time will cry this everlasting pain,
The cruelest pain of all, the one of love,
And hence her haunting memories remain.

The simple memory of Time does cry,
For there is not a single joyful remembrance
In its empty soul, whate'er it denies.

They say Time cures our every raw betray'l;
but nay, of hollow love we're all replete.
Affliction will never go away.

And what caused this horrendous Abstraction
if not a dolent Obliteration?
Now Time can only hope for Oblivion.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Brilliant poem, i liked it alot.
    You use words in a way that is incredibly powerful.
    5/5 !!
    Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    Yeah you've definatly got talent. alot of talent....this is good all the things you write are good im jealous lol!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    You have beautiful talent my friend...I truly enjoyed reading this one...loved it all but my favorite stanza was:

    Thus Time will cry this everlasting pain,
    The cruelest pain of all, the one of love,
    And hence her haunting memories remain

    hugs, love, Ann

  • 19 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Espero y todo este muy bien....^_^ que el viaje fue bueno y que te estes divirtiendo! Take care and hope to read more soon.

  • 19 years ago

    by asia[imperfection] is alone in the world

    That is a good poem i like it. it is cute.

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