Hermoso poema...como todos! Hope you keep writing and sharing your great poems with us...espero y todo este muy bien cuando con tu viaje! Well, take care and thank you for commenting on my poems ^_^

That is a good poem i like it. it is cute.

Espero y todo este muy bien....^_^ que el viaje fue bueno y que te estes divirtiendo! Take care and hope to read more soon.

You have beautiful talent my friend...I truly enjoyed reading this one...loved it all but my favorite stanza was:

Thus Time will cry this everlasting pain,
The cruelest pain of all, the one of love,
And hence her haunting memories remain

hugs, love, Ann

Yeah you've definatly got talent. alot of talent....this is good all the things you write are good im jealous lol!!!

Brilliant poem, i liked it alot.
You use words in a way that is incredibly powerful.
5/5 !!
Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx