Wow.....its a short but awsum poem.....cute........adorable.........and amazing....nice work.
5/5
luv
nami
xoxoxo

Great poem but i would like to make a suggestion that you certainly don't have to do. but i think that if you want to improve your writing you may take into consideration.

in this poem you repeat words a lot, i really like the concept of the poem but i think that the poem could be stronger if you didn't repeat the words so often. it sticks out to the reader after a while.

so this is just so maybe you can improve your writing or use it to improve your future writings. the poem is good i liked it.

~Jacklyn