Wow, this is my new favorite from you. It's so deep and powerful, and your sentence structure is incredible, like, the words...You put your sentences in a way that it's the same as someone just describing their love, but you twist it into your own words and make it so creative, it's beautiful. I greatly admire your talent... The whole thing was stunning, I loved the beginning the most I think though. Such a beautiful love story and an amazing dedication, anyone who has your love is so lucky...You're an amazing girl, Renee, I love you so much. EE> Take care, okay? EE> xxxxx love you.

Love always,
Your pretty pistol.xx

Beautiful poem I like your style

Wow very nicely written.. i especially love this poem! its so sweet/passionarte and very nice! i could never write that well. i esp. liked this part:Look me in the eyes, make this night seem like forever.
The stars fall in slow motion and we'll catch them all together.
Anyways very nice job your an awesome poet i cannot wait to read more! xox 5/5 overall!