by dollwithafrown Sep 26, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
It's a freezing cold night |
by Jenni Marie
This was so beautifully written...the first stanza drew me completely in, I didn't want it to end! |
I htink the imagery in this poem was amazing. You could imagine it. the words used were really great, as they described the cold night wonderfully. I liked the overall flow of it. One thing i disliked was teh fact it has no punctuation, this kinda threw me off a little. But your a great poet please keep writing! Thanks for your comments on my poems. xx |
by Jenni Marie
Wow! |
by JJ
Last night was a bitterly cold night and this poem precisely describes how I felt...its so strange that I come across this poem now. very weird! I enjoyed reading this piece (gives me something to thinking about today lol)...keep up the good work |
Again.. Amazing.. All of your poems i can relate to and they're really good. I especially like the 3rd verse of this.. Well done ! |