Wow thas an amzing poem :)
thnx for the comment x)
x x x

Once again.. fabulous

Thats such a wicked awesome dark poem. i lvoe it. it kept me into it the whole wa. it flowed great. and had good language.
the only thing i can say not good is that the first stanza made me think the rs was gonna be aaaa and instead it changed.
watch ur rs! lol

x3 Lauren

Wow, that is amazing! that really is just, wow, i loved it!! you did a wonderful job with the wording and the flow was great! you kept me interested the entire time!! bravo, amazing writer!! 5/5