Comments : Keep on trying

  • 19 years ago

    by aaron c s

    I've wanted to say that to sooo many people but i couldnt think of what to write. that was really good. i love the metaphorical language. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Veeery nice, thats one of the best poems I've ever read. I think I'll add you to moi favorites too;)
    Excellent, just beautiful:D:D
    Love, Line