Faded Shadows

by KitchBlood   Sep 26, 2005


I lived in the light,
of a mind so blissfully...
blank, unknowing.

I lived in the dark
of a mind so dangerously...
lost, confused.

I lived in the gray,
of the fadings,
where everything here is untrue.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Michael

    Oh....simple words, amazing result!

    Ummm "u'll get better?" HELLO!?! She IS better! She's better than me! My work is junk compared to her's!

  • 19 years ago

    by Daniel Hendrix

    Ok who ever says this is a bad poem is a bad poet i under stand what your saying i think, stupidity is bliss not to know the imposobilitys and have fath in a life so meaningless

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Then go somewhere else and live in the light...everything will be true...okey....

    ...do u mind checking out my poems....thanks...i'll see others later...

  • 19 years ago

    by KitchBlood

    Really? Because I loved it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Sorry but that was really bad!!!!

    you'll get better :)

    lucy