Death's Shadow Pt. 2

by LonelyNightsHurt   Sep 27, 2005


Family Weep, tears seep
Feels so long, been a week

Young life, lost to strife
In result, dependence on a knife

Called a name, took the blame
Lived life full of shame

People sighed, she's in disguise
In the end, she rose and flied

Off this earth, out of this curse
Returned as a new birth

In a child, lives happy and wild
Parents laugh and they smile

Remembered every day, in every way
In our hearts, she will stay

wasnt sure bout this one..but, i thought i'd put it on any way..so if you read it please comment on it, and let me know if its decent... love you all...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Solace

    I loved both parts. 5/5 none to less on both. Keep writing and take care [always]]xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 19 years ago

    by Crystal

    Hey brit.... its diff.... but it dont really follow da flow of da first one.... anyways i liked it.... u no i did.... k catch ya later..... luv ya.... bye

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