by XxTeArSxX17 Sep 27, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I THINK ABOUT |
Aw.. so sad but soo good i love this poem.. awesome job ... but you may want to go over it for some spelling mistakes.. lol =D |
5/5...thats what u deserve. and thats what i gave to u....i love the way u write love poems thats really ur thing...never give up on love...keep it up |
by Jamie
I liked this one ALOT it was well written and everything i think maybe you should try to use a better vocab and when you say things like second dont say 2 it makes it sound trashy but i really like this piece 5/5 |
by Tiny Reader
It was good. Seems kind of like a song. The flow works well on this without much rhythm. Good poem |
by LadyPearl
Good job. thanks for your comments |