Awwww *hugs*!!! hun i hope ur ok!! it was s sad and very emotional poem!!! im here 2 talk.. love u heaps gurl

0o0oh hUN!! l0t 0f em0ti0n in this 0ne. beautifully written but! g0od j0b! kEeP it up
l0tz 0f l0ve d0ra
-*x00o00x*-

Nice poem, a lot of emotion i enjoyed it.

xxx cici xxx

Wow, great one hun! Deep and good. 5.5 Keep it up!

Aw, its sad.. but beautiful

Great job! keep it up

Wow. grt poem.

Nana

I've only noticed a few minor mistakes; like 'fro' in stanza 6, sentance 2 should be 'for'. also, some of the sentances were very awkward; one of the first sentances had the word reminiscing at the end, but it was the beginning thought of the next line. thats hard to read and doesnt look very professional. well, thats about it. otehrwise, i like this poem a lot.

That was cool. I liked the style of wanting-and-not-having that the poem dragged on. nice.

Good job. thanks for your comments

~you seem to repeat "I" alot. But might just be me

It was good. Seems kind of like a song. The flow works well on this without much rhythm. Good poem

I liked this one ALOT it was well written and everything i think maybe you should try to use a better vocab and when you say things like second dont say 2 it makes it sound trashy but i really like this piece 5/5

5/5...thats what u deserve. and thats what i gave to u....i love the way u write love poems thats really ur thing...never give up on love...keep it up

Aw.. so sad but soo good i love this poem.. awesome job ... but you may want to go over it for some spelling mistakes.. lol =D