It's not that bad. i think you did a fien job on it but i know what thats liek and if you going through something liek that there is always some one willing to care if you ever need a friend i be here for you as much as i can. and thanks for you comment it means a lot to me

I loved it
keep it up hunn
love you heaps

andrea xxxxxxxx

Excellant poem. I can relate to this poem. It sucks when you feel lonely and like no one can hear you. Keep up the great work. Lu Nicole =)

Yeh that was great. keep writing hun and thankyou so much for your comment..made my day.
x x x

Im soo sorry you feel this way bbe..we love you and always will..im soo happy your back bbe

xx

-angel-

Its not that bad , at least you got guts

Good Poem..i can relate right now esp..

This is a good poem... I can relate to it sometimes... I think most people can... I feel like no one listens... and then when they do it's when I don't need them... especially when your parents are trying to let go or you want them to let go!!!
Well thanx for the comment that means a lot!!

Brittany

This poem isnt crap! I really liked it. It's something that at one point or another evrybody can relate to.

No this poem is really goodi loved it!! Excellent!!

I really like this poem, i can totally relate, dnt 4get im here 4 y0o!! luv maddy xxx

Another awesome poem keep up the exelent work.