I liked it

Uhh thats real good,but good. ive never heard one about necrophilia. interesting

I meant thats real nasty

Oh wow I must say !!!! * Still trying to pat down those hair on my arms * Very different YAP VERY DIFFERENT INDEED.....
I must say I thought it was unique kinda something you would see in a kinky XXX horror movie . I would say that is more of a humurous /funny poem rather than gross . I really think it deserves a 5/5 just for it's uniqueness and your vivid description of each detail . This will be one that sticks in my mind forever ...Excellent job !!!!!

Yeah that was wierd but it should have been in like dark depression or something but i liked it it was different

In an odd way that made me sad. she loved him so much.
very very good

Oh my god...That's so awesome! GOd I love you and your writing...Its disgusting, yet that's what makes it so...tasteful! Wow..Mmmm...I love this....May I show it to my friends?

All my love and admiration,
DarkSuicide

Hehe go for it dark thanks for the comments guys they make me happy

Wow you took my advice and put in in dark and depression that is good but i am still in love with this poem you loved someone that much you just could not let go of them so sad.....what posessed you to write something like this