Comments : Slit Wrists

  • 19 years ago

    by Juls

    I like it..its super good. I know how it is and i still dont know what it is.
    Great work
    Juls

  • 18 years ago

    by paddy

    Hi
    it's a good poem but i do think you could work on the wording abit,
    i know poems don't have to rhyme but i was stuck on this line
    "are you an attention seeker?"
    i just don't think it goes maybe i'm wrong what do i know i've not got enough info on self harming so i dunno i just think it couldhave a easier flow of wording but i do really like the rest
    4 out of 5 cant wait to read more
    take care
    lorna
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Betty Boop

    I like it...... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by *puddle ov blak tears*

    Luv this poem......short n sweet az! keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Welll...
    I liked it. Most dont do it for attention but other than that it was super good!! Keep up the great work I like it.
    Julie

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Very nice!!! very good meaning to that poem!

  • Short sweet and down to the point