Comment sent by ELIZABETH

Gary, La Tristesse Durera. The words just blow my mind. "The day turns black as a million bats cloud the sky" It's a fantasy story. Awake "psychedelic meadows of infinite destinies" I cannot believe the way you can make one line make a person think so much. "purple thistles sway in fields of forgotten forevers." Painful memories from the writer. "Opaque cloud passings of a blind moon." Only a true poet could write this way. and the girl is in so much pain. And he wants to take it all away. The tongue gash to his heart and the snowflakes like white gauze covering earthy wounds. Gary, these thoughts and how you write are amazing. I feel like the writer is trying to save a love that won't be saved and it is driving him crazy.
love, Elizabeth