Comments : The Wall Around My Heart

  • 19 years ago

    by Tammi

    Very good I love it and I have a special friend who says I can bring down her walls when I am around and that makes me feel good and I will always love her and I feel the pain in this poem keep up the good work 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by taeyanna

    Omg tthat was friggen amazing ur a great writer, keep up the good work,, when i was reading that i felt extactly how u where feeling i know where ur comming from on that.....that was sooo good gurl keep it up...come check out sum of mine id apreciate it..............XoTaeyannaXo

  • 18 years ago

    by dezi

    It's kinda funny not long ago I was trying to create a poem about something simular but failed....you did an awesome job!!
    very well written my friend keep it up.

    p.s. the last stanza made me cry.