You have a gift and a talent I am envious of...this is brilliant....a unique combination of words, to create images, telling a story, within the story...insightful and heartfelt.

Wow so heartfelt ..simply breathtaking . You've made many great points .

Hey There Mr.Thug Poet

Well, I am actually in a shock state from reading this because i have not yet read something quite like this. Words hold a power like no other and to reconize the power that they have in a unique yet simple way amazes me. I absolutely love this poem and i am extremely impressed with the way you conveyed this message...
awsome job and congrats for being the first i have seen on adressing this issue with such passion and style.

take care
Miss scooby

Im back again to read more of your amazing work!!! keep it up!!!!!please check out my latest poem i wanna know what you think..thanks!!!

Another great write. you bring creativity to your work and my it definately your own. i haven't read work quiet like this. great job with the power of what a word can do. it's amazing to think of how words can mack such a different to the world. words get us farther than violance as well. beautiful write.

~Jacklyn