by SexyBabe101 Sep 27, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
I flew into the air, but some how i wasn't aware, |
Haha at first I was wondering where this poem was going but the ending cought me by surprise. I love the ending! It's really good. Cheers. 5/5 |
by Aimee
Nive poem laura maybe put each verse on a new line but otha than that i loved it |
by Ashelin
I like it, You could put spaces between the lines to make it easier to read and see where the flow is, but it is good non the less 4/5 |