So what was your mark in our History poem again?? Its great by the way.

This is worthy of publishing. it depics a the effects of war so perfectly.

Ruby

Godd poem but i don't really like the whole 2 by 2 rhyming, u know lik when every 2 lines rhyme.

That was so cool I loved it no matter what anyone says Suz you are great
Love
Em

Awesome poem - I've been wanting to write a war poem for a while but I seem to fail rather often.

and constant nightmares will haunt my sleep

I think that line was a little too long and ruined the flow . . . but it picks up quickly so the dent is only small.

Peace. [Sole]

Lol, i know u've written better. the improvement is obvious : )