by Ann Stareyes Sep 27, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Music plays softly |
by Angie
How beautiful Ann! Very romantic and sweet..... I love the style in which you wrote this one too. Wonderful...... |
by dora
0hh sh0rt n sweet. beautifully written ann! great j0b! keeP em c0ming |
by Drew Gold
I feel you do a good job of setting up a romantic situation, and then take it one step further,.. you end at that step, but its like a cliff hanger,.. cuz they give into emotion, then love is conquered.. i guess its a good way to end it.. just capturing that moment,.. but it seems like its unfinished to me.. anyway,.. a good fluent read that captured a worthy moment so vividly.. good job! |
by HJ
Great read, romantic and heartfelt. |
by HOLLY ARMER
Wow! This is beautiful! This poem say's so much in so few word's. I especially adore the second stanza, a very breathtaking read! Keep it up~Holly |