Wow! This is beautiful! This poem say's so much in so few word's. I especially adore the second stanza, a very breathtaking read! Keep it up~Holly

Great read, romantic and heartfelt.

I agree with Holly I also partically liked the second stanza.

Thank you for your kind words on my "devils delight" its good to be back!!

Kisses
Hayley

I feel you do a good job of setting up a romantic situation, and then take it one step further,.. you end at that step, but its like a cliff hanger,.. cuz they give into emotion, then love is conquered.. i guess its a good way to end it.. just capturing that moment,.. but it seems like its unfinished to me.. anyway,.. a good fluent read that captured a worthy moment so vividly.. good job!

0hh sh0rt n sweet. beautifully written ann! great j0b! keeP em c0ming
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How beautiful Ann! Very romantic and sweet..... I love the style in which you wrote this one too. Wonderful......

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela