How can you describe love? [Edited]

by JR Cabling   Sep 27, 2005


When I first saw you
I knew I was in trouble
How can a girl like you
Fall in love with someone who's not as adorable

When you first called my name
I didn't know what to say
Wondering if
You were just playing your game

When you started talking
I became speechless
How can I speak?
Your beauty breathless

When we first kiss
I couldn't describe this feeling
Was this the start of love bliss?
Or was it just your sweet lips?

I don't know if this was a dream come true
because all I ever wanted was to find somebody like you.

**Go easy with the rating, I'm not that good but I'm trying to get better. Feel free to comment or give me a few pointers and thank you in advance. Also, Thank you for reading this poem.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

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    by Switchblade89

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    by kida

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