Fatality

by Unrequited   Sep 27, 2005


Combustion
eruption
on the edge of a shattered life
no love
no heart
you left me here to die

my combustion and eruption
and you did nothing...
just watch the flames
as my heart burns

the end of me
a fatal loss
because of you

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  • 19 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Ooo...short and seems empty, but there is meaning deep inside...

    erupting
    on the edge of a shattered life

    ..beautiful line there tom...i luv it.
    its great talkin to ya on aim! if u ever have time, check some of my recent poems. I know i dont write as many anymore as i used to, but thats because i'm so busy with school and stuff .Hopefully i'll have time to keep writing as many as before. Keep up the great poems, cya on aim:)

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