Ooo...short and seems empty, but there is meaning deep inside...

erupting
on the edge of a shattered life

..beautiful line there tom...i luv it.
its great talkin to ya on aim! if u ever have time, check some of my recent poems. I know i dont write as many anymore as i used to, but thats because i'm so busy with school and stuff .Hopefully i'll have time to keep writing as many as before. Keep up the great poems, cya on aim:)