by katie! Sep 27, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
A bit of fun, that\'s all, each of you say |
Wow that was such a powerful poem.. I just love it. "She became but a nothing, a soulless shell |
by Tara Kay
Wow, i thought that was just unbelievable, it was deep, touching and made me think and was true and real. it was just really worht reading. I loved it |
Great job. Some people can be so ignorant. You did amazing... and don't let anybody bring you down. I don't know you, but I know you're way better than them. 5/5 |
by ashley
I cant really tell you what its like to be bullied. but i was bigger when i was younger and i had alot of friends surprisingly. but as time passed on i found that those people that i thought were my friends talked about me all the time which lead me to stop eatting and then puring of the stomach . a horrible thing to do. so finally i learned that i was beautiful the way i was and i didnt need people like that in my life. but its too bad that it took four years of killing my self to look good for others to realize this. so now i live a healthy weight of 140 becuase i did it the right way. people who laugh at those that are built different or a little heavier are cruel cold hearted people who are looking for attention to better them sleves and make themsleves feel more like a person. but what they really are is cowards. bringing someone else pain for your own happiness is mean and cruel and it makes you look like a person with no heart. |
Wow i love this poem. it is very discriptive on what bullies do and how people accutly feal.i would like to hope that no one would ever do this but the better part of me knows diffrent. but 5/5 keep up the good work |