Wow thats a good poem, the ending is good i liek the way u kinda put a twist in it good work *Hugs4You* xox rc

Fcuk this is scary. its so morbid... i gav it 5/5. i am almost in tears. well written. i plan to read more of ur poems, so keep on writing!

Kool poem i love it i';ve never thought of writting something like this i think i'll try!

Very sad n emotinal poem!! keep up the good work cuz this is very a great work n i can relate to it alot alot!! 5/5 keep it up!! {could u return the fav thanks!}

Hey great poem bullies are shit scared of anyone who sticks up 45 themselves i learned that wif this guy who is mean 2 me luke but i still dont stick up 4 myself ( im 2 scared 2 get in2 trouble ) plz read sum of mine and comment

You sound like my nieber i know that they do that to her to and its mean and reall sad its not kool but alot of ppl can relate

Wow amazing. You beautifully write about a disturbing topic. It's so well written and helps bring people to pay attention to the pain it causes.
5/5
Sarah x

Gees.............wow.....so much feeling, love it, keep writing, you sure do know how!

Girl,u have a talent,this was wow and I have nothing bad to say...This was so bitterly moving and dark in a way!It's just awesome

Excellent read .. you can feel the pain the anguishe.. having gone through that at school when i was younger i too felt the same

Excellent poem M'Dear.

Though there were some part where you would rhyme "alone' with "alone" I think you can do better.

I especially heart the last sentence of the poem.

I can't say I know how you feel exactly, because people in school have never taunt me about my weight, however....my mother does give me a hard time about it.

It hurts much more when your family can be so critical.

I wuv this poem.

I think your message was loud and clear.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

I really like that poem. Hey, at work yesterday, my friend and I made a pact to show our hit list exceptions in case we come in with ak47s. I thanked him for adding me to his and added him to mine, lol.

Brillient poem it looked long when i first saw it but when i started reading it was immpossible to stop. it went very fast great job!!!
xaaronx

Holy geeze that poem was . . . I am speechless. This poem was amazing and so . . . so amazing. Great job hunny!

-Mikochan

Wow an incredible poem
keep it up!

Oh My! the power in this is out of this world amazing. The topic you chose is so complex yet you sustained interest, wrote powerfully but simply and gave a powerful message! What more can I ask for?
All the Best
Sondos

Awe omg thats so sad. you are a great writer!

Wow i love this poem. it is very discriptive on what bullies do and how people accutly feal.i would like to hope that no one would ever do this but the better part of me knows diffrent. but 5/5 keep up the good work

I cant really tell you what its like to be bullied. but i was bigger when i was younger and i had alot of friends surprisingly. but as time passed on i found that those people that i thought were my friends talked about me all the time which lead me to stop eatting and then puring of the stomach . a horrible thing to do. so finally i learned that i was beautiful the way i was and i didnt need people like that in my life. but its too bad that it took four years of killing my self to look good for others to realize this. so now i live a healthy weight of 140 becuase i did it the right way. people who laugh at those that are built different or a little heavier are cruel cold hearted people who are looking for attention to better them sleves and make themsleves feel more like a person. but what they really are is cowards. bringing someone else pain for your own happiness is mean and cruel and it makes you look like a person with no heart.

Great job. Some people can be so ignorant. You did amazing... and don't let anybody bring you down. I don't know you, but I know you're way better than them. 5/5

- Thanks for reading my poem -

~ Tina