Wow, i thought that was just unbelievable, it was deep, touching and made me think and was true and real. it was just really worht reading. I loved it
love Tara-Kay

Wow that was such a powerful poem.. I just love it. "She became but a nothing, a soulless shell
Having lost all sense of heaven, residing in hell" that is my favorite line out of the entire thing... the message in this poem is so strong. Its amazing how people can be so cruel to another human being and not even know it. And I also agree that with each "evil" person there is a story or a situation that made them that way and the stories of these people are usually the ones that get over looked. Sometimes even the troubled people need to be looked after. I love this poem. Its amazing! you captured so many emotions that it would be impossible to comment on all of the. Anyway I think this comment is long enough, just wanted to say WOW! way to go.. keep it up a definate 5/5