Hey! Wow that is a really great poem. I've been through things like that and you expressed it perfectly. Hang in there! Check out my poems also. Keep up the good work!

Shoot! I'm very pleased! It left me ineffably breathless! My favourite lines were the whole damn poem! =)

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

I liked the strange changes in topic that seemed to ripple through the whole poem. Very nice

Good Writing!
beth