By our side

by maya   Sep 27, 2005


The dieing body,with the flying soul.
The holes in your heart,along with the scars on the bars of your abandoned body.

Take my hand and our dieing bodies shall not die alone.
The tone of evil in our ears, but we shall over come. the hum of cry we look by on our way to sneaking death.

The sreaking abuse we may receive is nothing but the past.
As long as you have me and I have you.
By our sides we may die...

i wrote this 4 my friend Savanna if you vote and comment we will do the same 4 you.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Arkon

    I loved the detail you put in this poem. Check some of mine out, you write like I do I think...

  • 19 years ago

    by Becca1111

    Wow, thats good Maya... keep it up gurl, poetry is a good outlet for feelings, ive tried a lot of things and it works for me... and aparetly it also works for you. 5/5

    much love always,
    becca

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiffani

    That was a sad poem... but good i gave u a 4, keep it up