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by JL   Sep 27, 2005


In his tower way up high
Touching the endless diamond sky
Watching as the world goes by
Always asking how or why
Contemplating suicide

His pain he can not abide
Drifting away in the tide
The last thing he saw before he died
A little girl with flooded eyes
Then to life he said goodbye

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  • 19 years ago

    by JL

    Thanx nikki *hugs* i'd make it longer but i couldnt find anymore rhyming words.....and i got distracted (very hard to believe lol). luv ya

  • I Liked This Poem Alot! Your Talent Never Ceases To Amaze Me...The First Part Of Your Poem Blew Me Away...It Was Short And Very Good...You Make Me Wish It Was Longer *Hugs And Love* 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo