by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child Sep 27, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Cutting all of these emotions out |
by Kristie
WOW! THAT WAS AWESOME! I just finished reading one of your others and i read this and i was like damn....when i thought they couldn't get any better. I can totally relate to this poem. It was really good. Keep it up! |
Hey |
Love it!! love it!! love it!! |
Very intense poem. I liked how each sentence rhymed with the one below it and how the whole structure formed to its powerful ending. I loved it! 5/5 from me and I've added you to my favorites . Cheers, Mercedes |
by hm
That was deep and i can sooo relate thanks for da comments.... |