That was so beautiful... so true!! Keep up the excellent work... Becky ..x..

This poem was utter perfection, the way you use the sun and the stars to describe forever. The picture I got when reading this poem was beautiful beyond words. Forever may never be true with anyone, but the most you can do about that is push that fact aside and live like it is. You can't constantly live thinking and knowing everyone will leave you, because you will end up falling further away from them and by doing that you would never know if it was a true forever or not. I love you Sarah. Stay strong for me

Take Care,
Renee

...WOW...hun this is beautiful and i love how its not another self hurt poem yet it exploits pain keep it up i love ur writing

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