by lexx Sep 27, 2005
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
9/11 what a day to remember, |
Nice poem- well written and touched the soul. |
by Allison
Lex, your poem is great and u are an excellent rhymer and writer. |
I like it, and you chose something that will hit alot of people's hearts, well done. read mine please, i'd like to hear your thoughts, thanks |
by jaki
Well done, your message is clear, although it could maybe flow a bit better through the first half. The second half was very well written though. |