Well done, your message is clear, although it could maybe flow a bit better through the first half. The second half was very well written though.

*jackie*

I like it, and you chose something that will hit alot of people's hearts, well done. read mine please, i'd like to hear your thoughts, thanks

Lex, your poem is great and u are an excellent rhymer and writer.

Nice poem- well written and touched the soul.
Rock on.
Shirlz.