Broken

by Lady Vengeance   Sep 27, 2005


I was there when the walls fell
the walls that protected my heart from hell
the love i crave is overrated
my dreams forgotten lay old and faded

A red rose with dew beaded
if only time was all i needed
bring forth the sorrow i will feel
the facts have never been so real

if i were to care i would be scarred
that's why i kept my feelings barred
i trusted but one with my heart
he pierced my soul like a dart

I knew that this had no end
and to my heart no one would tend
so as tomorrow will not come
i will remember.....it was my gun.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dracula

    Veeery dramatic. so u : D

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Yes i realise this poem sucks A**. sorry. lol. i wwas but a young bloomer when i wrote this. lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    Its a great piece but i prefer some of your other work. You have a load of talent.

    Kat

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Super work, this poem has great emotion.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    This is going to take ages
    Im reading ALL your poems and commenting
    I love your poems suz
    love
    Em