Very Good but not as good as your others in my opinion.

This one is a bit different. it the style is the same, but teh feelings just... differnt. its still a worthwile poem. i enjoyed it

Ruby

This ROCKS!! EXCELLENT job! thanks s0o much for the comment on my stuff it mean s0o much to me! well yea ur so0 talented!!! ur an amazing writter! keep up the wonderful work!
x0x0
kandie!

Wow...excellent. I liked it..full of emotions I gave it a 5/5. I like ur work. Keep it up
Juls

Again, the 2 by 2 rhyming i don't like, but besides that it's good.

This is going to take ages
Im reading ALL your poems and commenting
I love your poems suz
love
Em

Super work, this poem has great emotion.

Its a great piece but i prefer some of your other work. You have a load of talent.

Kat

Yes i realise this poem sucks A**. sorry. lol. i wwas but a young bloomer when i wrote this. lol

Veeery dramatic. so u : D