Stop trying to kill yourself.

by Nito Vazquez   Sep 28, 2005


You say you want to die,
but that's all a lie.
I think that's really dumb,
STOP!! acting like a bum.

Please stop this crap,
this is one of the devils traps.
This really isn't funny,
come on stop i love you honey.

Come back to me,
and we can be free.
please grab my hand,
so we can get down and touch the land.

That was really some dumb sh**,
that's something I'll never forget.

Rate this poem and tell the truth because I'm a amateur. THANK YOU PEOPLE LOVE YOU LOTS!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!

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  • 17 years ago

    by XxXTwistedxXxIllusionXxX

    "You say you want to die,
    but that's all a lie.
    I think that's really dumb,
    STOP!! acting like a bum."

    i like that... it is true in most cases, great job... i hope everything is ok... or that it got better... (don't know how long ago you published this poem or how long ago you wrote it) great job still... i don't believe you are an amateur.. it seems like you got your own way of writing and i like it (personally)

    -love whitney

  • 18 years ago

    by you come in this world alone in you leav alone

    Hey whats poppin i think thats really good u got sum talent i give u a 5/5
    keep ya head up
    *kristina*

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