I really really like this poem a lot... It all fits together... I have been in the situation of being played... But I say the same as you...
Well if you wouldn't mind then please go to and comment on my poems like In The Line Of Duty (thats a new one), Life, and Goodbye and any others

Brittany

Very well written, flowed nicely, 5 out of 5...good job, if you wouldnt mind read one of my poems, my movie, its the only one i like.haha, anywho i liked your poems just know that gurls play guys too!

WOW this is really good i can relate to this poem a lot. i have been thru that before. i love this poem. its great.

WOW this is really good i can relate to this poem a lot. i have been thru that before. i love this poem. its great.

First of all, i would like to say thank you for the comment you left me. Second of all..WOW, you're an amazing writer. I love this poem especially. I think most of us have felt this way and you did an amazing job of relating it to me, and i imagine others 2. GREAT JOB!