Great poem...i gave it a 5..keep it up!!
Katie

This is kinda sad...wow...but i know what u mean...5/5

Form the three poems that I have read so far, I can tell your poems are exactly what I like to read.

You're on my favourite's list now.

"If I look in your eyes,
Will I get to see your thoughts?
Last time we said our goodbyes,
I left for another port."

The second line doesn't rhyme much with the fourth line.

"And I find myself thinking,
Where do we go from here?
Will our lives be sinking?
Or will we disprove our peers?"

This was my favourite stanza, expecially the last two lines M'Dear.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!